The Museum

The museums are an important part of the humanity's history, to where the main issues have been collected throughout the time to be preserved. Many important discoveries are revealed at the museums like:"the existence of the dinosaurs, the first civilizations on earth and important pieces of famous characters in the history: Supplies, clothes and documents written by those people". That represents a lot in the development of our history.

The first museum was opened in 1776 in the United States, with supplies provided by the citizens who had discovered and picked out those things in their farms or their surroundings while working,Things like:"Huge animal's bones, minerals and other mysterious things at that time, were given to that musem to be framed and published for the few visitors who attended at first. That idea was originally unknown, due to the lack of means of transportations and ways to advertise the new project. Then, the idea was adapted around the main cities in Europe, which wanted to preserve the important issues, which were currently happening like:"The Rennaissance". which gave most things to the history: Books,scientific discoveries, paintings, pictures and important documents like:"The human's rights and many other things", wich were a turning poing in the historry.

The museums offer many Kind of shows, the temporary one it that which lasts a short time period, with special featurings, and displays with mini videos showing footages about misteries, solving doubts of the visitors. On the other hand, there's the permanent one, who's is exhibits have been always there and will be there for good.

Museums creat the perfect atmosphere, with background artists who design it similar to the original, using artificial goods. Making moulds of snakes and other animals to put them at the museums, the process is carried out by specialists. These jobs require many people behind of it to Label,tagg and record the stuffs of the museum. As well as, scientists and investigators who propose improvements and new ways to provide much more entertainment to their attenders. Museums also have aisles, which distribuite the different variety of things exhibited in there. The organization are incredible, from the assistant at the ticket counter to the museum guides. 

To develop this book, the author "GAYL GIBBONS". had to live the experience in every area at the museums, to inform detaily to the readers, that's why before launching it he made sure about verified his collected information, which was checked out by many museums and finally being sure, he launched it and nowadays has received good critiques.

Very nice!! A few spelling errors are highlighted in red. 

Also there were a few unnecessary words, which are underlined. 

Other mistakes (placement, grammar, etc.) are in blue.  

Just remove those purple words  [Symbol] but other than that, it is perfect. 

Critiques - the reviews that are written about a piece of work, like a book or a movie. 

Critics - the people who write critiques 

To critique something - verb 

In English, we often don't use "the" in front of every word. If we are talking about something in general, we don't say "the"  

"Advertise" is like dar a conocer. In this case, advertise is better than saying "spread the rumor" because a rumor usually isn't true.  

To advertise a new product 

To verify - to confirm or prove something.